Saturday, September 4, 2010

Tum ko apna banaana chahta hoon

6 comments:

  1. sach me kafi aacha likte ho
    tumara her ik sabd dil ko chu gaya h
    hamare shubhkamnay aap ke sath h
    nitin panipat

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  2. aap ke poem kafi pasand aayi ye poem hi kya aap ke "shagun " hi kafi aachi lagi aaj ke dor me itna kuch likh pana kisi ki ley ya apne khyal bana kisi ke ley bare muskil h
    aap ki ye line to dil ko chu gayi
    TUMHE HER DUA ME MAGNA CHATE H
    ............KALPNA gUPTA ..........
    PRESIDENT YUTH CLUB

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  3. kya khub likha h
    "bhula ker apne sare gum
    tume dil se apna chata hu"
    sach me ye line dil ko itni chu gayi ki man kiya padte hi rahe
    umeed h aap hame aage bhi bayjte rahe ge
    hamari subh kamnay aap ki sath h
    NITI BATRA
    SONIPAT

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  4. nice likhte ho dost sabhi kehte ha tum aacha likhte ho
    ok bye
    kusam sharma
    serinagar

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  5. sach me kafi aacha likhte ho
    hamare kamnay hamesa tumare sath h
    kuch bhi naya likho to ham ko jarur bayjna
    vini2005hr@gmail.com

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  6. आप काफ़ी सुन्दर लिखते हैं सच मे आप के लिखने का अंदाज ही अलग से हैं

    आप का इक इक शब्द दिल के तारो को झींझोर देता हैं
    प्रेसीडेंट मेडिकल कमेटी ,
    राहुल डूबे

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