aap ke poem kafi pasand aayi ye poem hi kya aap ke "shagun " hi kafi aachi lagi aaj ke dor me itna kuch likh pana kisi ki ley ya apne khyal bana kisi ke ley bare muskil h aap ki ye line to dil ko chu gayi TUMHE HER DUA ME MAGNA CHATE H ............KALPNA gUPTA .......... PRESIDENT YUTH CLUB
kya khub likha h "bhula ker apne sare gum tume dil se apna chata hu" sach me ye line dil ko itni chu gayi ki man kiya padte hi rahe umeed h aap hame aage bhi bayjte rahe ge hamari subh kamnay aap ki sath h NITI BATRA SONIPAT
sach me kafi aacha likte ho
ReplyDeletetumara her ik sabd dil ko chu gaya h
hamare shubhkamnay aap ke sath h
nitin panipat
aap ke poem kafi pasand aayi ye poem hi kya aap ke "shagun " hi kafi aachi lagi aaj ke dor me itna kuch likh pana kisi ki ley ya apne khyal bana kisi ke ley bare muskil h
ReplyDeleteaap ki ye line to dil ko chu gayi
TUMHE HER DUA ME MAGNA CHATE H
............KALPNA gUPTA ..........
PRESIDENT YUTH CLUB
kya khub likha h
ReplyDelete"bhula ker apne sare gum
tume dil se apna chata hu"
sach me ye line dil ko itni chu gayi ki man kiya padte hi rahe
umeed h aap hame aage bhi bayjte rahe ge
hamari subh kamnay aap ki sath h
NITI BATRA
SONIPAT
nice likhte ho dost sabhi kehte ha tum aacha likhte ho
ReplyDeleteok bye
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serinagar
sach me kafi aacha likhte ho
ReplyDeletehamare kamnay hamesa tumare sath h
kuch bhi naya likho to ham ko jarur bayjna
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