Friday, December 10, 2010

Hai Meri Saanse Teri Amaanat Ae Mere Sanam

9 comments:

  1. sach me very nice vishu ji kya bat h

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  2. ab tak aap 30 poem likh chuke ho sach me aaj ki poem kafi jyada pasand aayi ham ko

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  3. aaj kuch sarch karte huy 1st time tumara blog dekha pura to nahi padh pay pr jitna bhi pada kafi aacha laga ki aaj ke time me bhi kuch hat kr likne wala h or vo bhi scrap ke sath ik nayi jan dal dayte ho her scrap me aap aap ki ye kavita ham yaha ke news paper me baj rahi h print hone pr us ki copy aap ko mail kr de ge

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  4. kya aap sab kuch shagun ko dhyan me rek kr likhte h ya kisi or ko bhi

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  5. hey mayre sanse tayre aamant
    nice line h or nice wording h yer puri poem hi kafi aache h

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  6. likhne ka andaj sab kuch us jaysa h thora sa fark h hame to sak hone lagta h ki kahi anjan ki dusri id to nahi pr kuch fark hone ke karn chup ho jate h
    vase kafi aacha likhte ho

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  7. very nice
    Words are so powerful - they are our thoughts, emotions, sentiments - nice piece

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  8. likhne ka andaj kafi better h i like it

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  9. aaj aap ki kuch poem padhi sach me padh ker aachi lagi dil ko chu jate h

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