Hai Meri Saanse Teri Amaanat Ae Mere Sanam
Hai Meri Saanse Teri Amaanat Ae Mere Sanam,
Mili Hai Mujhko Teri Muhobbat
Hai Yeh Tera Karam,
Jau Teri Chaahat Mili Na Hoti,
Sau Dilki Mefil Sajee Na Hoti,
Yeh Zindagi Zindagi Na Hoti,
Agar Milte Na Hum,
Sunaayen Aankhe Tere Fasaane,Hai Dhadkanon Mein,
Tere Taraane,Khudaa Muhobbat Ka Tujhko Maane,
Dil Teri Kasam,Tun Dil Mein Armaan Yun Ban Ke Rahnaa,
Wafaa Ki Pehchaan,Yun Ban Ke Rahna,
"shagun" Tun Meri Jindgi Ban Ke Rahna Tun Janam Janam.
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sach me very nice vishu ji kya bat h
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likhne ka andaj sab kuch us jaysa h thora sa fark h hame to sak hone lagta h ki kahi anjan ki dusri id to nahi pr kuch fark hone ke karn chup ho jate h
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very nice
ReplyDeleteWords are so powerful - they are our thoughts, emotions, sentiments - nice piece
likhne ka andaj kafi better h i like it
ReplyDeleteaaj aap ki kuch poem padhi sach me padh ker aachi lagi dil ko chu jate h
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